Post by Boneleg on Oct 7, 2006 17:23:07 GMT -5
Warriors: Dark Noon
Story:
The queen gasped for breath, feeling another pain rack through her body.
“It’s okay, Tess, you’ll be fine!” whispered the voice of her mate, Soul. He licked her comfortingly on the cheek. “I know… Soul.” She whispered back through the pain.
Suddenly the sky began to grow dark. Soul looked up in alarm. A shadow was passing over the sun! “What’s happening?” cried Tess. Soul didn’t reply, his eyes glued to the sun - Or what was left of it. It was now half covered. Soul screwed up his eyes. After a moment the sun was no longer. Instead there was a dark hole in the blackness of the sky, with a firey ring around it.
Suddenly Tess cried out in pain. “My kits!” she mewed. Soul looked down, his eyes trying to adjust to the alarming darkness. He could not see, but he heard the little mewling of kits. Tess had kitted! Soul tried to see the little bundles of fur, but there was little light for his eyes to reflect, so it was hard.
But then, a sliver of light appeared. Soul looked up. The shadow was moving away! The sun was reappearing! It was over in a matter of seconds. The sun was returned, and Tess had four healthy kits at her side. No, five! Soul saw the little kit, shuddering and gasping for breath.
“Soul, he’s dieing!” cried Tess. Soul mewed in distress and began licking the kit franticly, willing him to live. But the pure white kit drew one last, rasping breath, then breathed no more. Tess yowled miserably. Soul closed his eyes against the pain and suddenly a vision burst into his head.
The sun was covered in shadow, and a pure white tom stood in front of him. It was his kit, alive, healthy and full-grown. The kit smiled broadly at Soul and when he spoke, it was like a dozen cats speaking in the same, clear tone.
“When the sun is shrouded in shadow,
Five kits shall be born with destinies to fulfill,
Four will lead their Clans through danger
And one will watch over them all”
Soul opened his eyes and the vision was gone.
Tess stared at him with bloodshot eyes. “He died,” she meowed blankly. “I couldn’t save him.” Soul looked at her. “Tess, it wasn’t your fault… I just-”
Suddenly he broke off, eyes widening. “Badger!” he hissed. Tess gasped. “Quick, you and the kits, go to the abandoned fox den – Now!”
Tess stared at him. “No, Soul, I-” she began to protest, but it was too late, she looked back as she took her kits to the fox den to see the snarling black, white, gray and bloody battle between her mate and the badger. She took the kits carefully one by one, and even the little white one came, for she could not bear to leave him there. She waited, and after what seemed like moons, there was quiet.
Soul never returned.
Tess died of an illness that winter, leaving her four-moon-old kits to fend for themselves. They each wandered apart, and took care of themselves well. They became stronger then stone, more graceful then the tide, more mysterious then the cave and nobler then the trees. They were never alone, for their brother watched over them from the night sky, they often saw him in the full moon. One kit grew up in the rocky, steep places of the north. One lived on an island in the middle of a lake. Another lived in a place where the trees grew thick. And the last one lived in the caves underground, learning to navigate through the dark.
They became the leaders of the four clans… StoneClan, TideClan, TimberClan and CaveClan, watched closely by the cats who had passed away into the stars of MoonClan.
Here's the URL to the site: www.darknoon.proboards82.com
PLOT
So the three Clans, ForestClan, TideClan and StoneClan are living in peace and hormony in the forest, cliffs and Islands. Life is normal, nothing to worry about, so ya. But after awhile the cat's start to notice something unusual in the forest. Prey from all Clans have gone missing, and they all have a strange scent left behind on them. Also the patrols feel like they are being watched... could it be the rouges? But no, it's not a rouge scent! What is it...?
CaveClan cats have never before shown themselves to the outside world, but now, with thier new leader Secretstar they might just show themselves and become a fourth Clan. But with the other cats allow this? Will there be war between boundries and such?
This is where I need yur help. Is there something we can add to make it more exciting? And we are going to need all the Leader, Deputy and Medicine Cat positions filled okay? So start recruiting members!
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Story:
The queen gasped for breath, feeling another pain rack through her body.
“It’s okay, Tess, you’ll be fine!” whispered the voice of her mate, Soul. He licked her comfortingly on the cheek. “I know… Soul.” She whispered back through the pain.
Suddenly the sky began to grow dark. Soul looked up in alarm. A shadow was passing over the sun! “What’s happening?” cried Tess. Soul didn’t reply, his eyes glued to the sun - Or what was left of it. It was now half covered. Soul screwed up his eyes. After a moment the sun was no longer. Instead there was a dark hole in the blackness of the sky, with a firey ring around it.
Suddenly Tess cried out in pain. “My kits!” she mewed. Soul looked down, his eyes trying to adjust to the alarming darkness. He could not see, but he heard the little mewling of kits. Tess had kitted! Soul tried to see the little bundles of fur, but there was little light for his eyes to reflect, so it was hard.
But then, a sliver of light appeared. Soul looked up. The shadow was moving away! The sun was reappearing! It was over in a matter of seconds. The sun was returned, and Tess had four healthy kits at her side. No, five! Soul saw the little kit, shuddering and gasping for breath.
“Soul, he’s dieing!” cried Tess. Soul mewed in distress and began licking the kit franticly, willing him to live. But the pure white kit drew one last, rasping breath, then breathed no more. Tess yowled miserably. Soul closed his eyes against the pain and suddenly a vision burst into his head.
The sun was covered in shadow, and a pure white tom stood in front of him. It was his kit, alive, healthy and full-grown. The kit smiled broadly at Soul and when he spoke, it was like a dozen cats speaking in the same, clear tone.
“When the sun is shrouded in shadow,
Five kits shall be born with destinies to fulfill,
Four will lead their Clans through danger
And one will watch over them all”
Soul opened his eyes and the vision was gone.
Tess stared at him with bloodshot eyes. “He died,” she meowed blankly. “I couldn’t save him.” Soul looked at her. “Tess, it wasn’t your fault… I just-”
Suddenly he broke off, eyes widening. “Badger!” he hissed. Tess gasped. “Quick, you and the kits, go to the abandoned fox den – Now!”
Tess stared at him. “No, Soul, I-” she began to protest, but it was too late, she looked back as she took her kits to the fox den to see the snarling black, white, gray and bloody battle between her mate and the badger. She took the kits carefully one by one, and even the little white one came, for she could not bear to leave him there. She waited, and after what seemed like moons, there was quiet.
Soul never returned.
Tess died of an illness that winter, leaving her four-moon-old kits to fend for themselves. They each wandered apart, and took care of themselves well. They became stronger then stone, more graceful then the tide, more mysterious then the cave and nobler then the trees. They were never alone, for their brother watched over them from the night sky, they often saw him in the full moon. One kit grew up in the rocky, steep places of the north. One lived on an island in the middle of a lake. Another lived in a place where the trees grew thick. And the last one lived in the caves underground, learning to navigate through the dark.
They became the leaders of the four clans… StoneClan, TideClan, TimberClan and CaveClan, watched closely by the cats who had passed away into the stars of MoonClan.
Here's the URL to the site: www.darknoon.proboards82.com
PLOT
So the three Clans, ForestClan, TideClan and StoneClan are living in peace and hormony in the forest, cliffs and Islands. Life is normal, nothing to worry about, so ya. But after awhile the cat's start to notice something unusual in the forest. Prey from all Clans have gone missing, and they all have a strange scent left behind on them. Also the patrols feel like they are being watched... could it be the rouges? But no, it's not a rouge scent! What is it...?
CaveClan cats have never before shown themselves to the outside world, but now, with thier new leader Secretstar they might just show themselves and become a fourth Clan. But with the other cats allow this? Will there be war between boundries and such?
This is where I need yur help. Is there something we can add to make it more exciting? And we are going to need all the Leader, Deputy and Medicine Cat positions filled okay? So start recruiting members!
Affiliate:
url: i12.tinypic.com/3yriwbk.gif