Rainpelt~.WindClan.~

[rainpelt]

Rainpaw-WindClan-apprentice
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Name: Rainpaw

Gender: Tom

Clan: Windclan

Age in Moons: 6 moons

Position: apprentice

Description: www.imgdump.net/images2/f8c62eba.gif
Mostly white with patches of brown and gray on back, legs, head, and nose. Long skinny tail that's mostly brownish gray.

Personality: Rainpaw is aloft and easy-going. Though he can easily loose his temper if something really rubs him the wrong way. He is loyal and is willing to do anything to help his clan. He hopes to be a great warrior one day and often day-dreams about it. Unfortunately, he spends a little too much time daydreaming...It'll be a wonder if he ever proves himself warrior-worthy enough to become one.

History: Rainpelt was clanborn, a healthy kit though the runt of the litter. He was vary playful, eager and energetic which is a major contrast to his current personality. Except for the fact that he has always been a day-dreamer.

(I hope that's long enough...I can't think of anything else. Darn this uncreative mind)

[Browns:Ghost]

Please make it a little longer and with complete sentences.

Besdies that... good.

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[blueyes]

[glow=limegreen,2,300]Agreed. By the way, you must be at least 6 moons to train as an apprentice. Otherwise, you wil be known as a kit.[/glow]

[rainpelt]

oops, I have no idea why I put 5 moons. 0.o
I'll change it, sorry about my incomplete sentences -_-' I'll fix it up.

[blueyes]

[glow=limegreen,2,300]I'm really sorry, Rainpaw. All I think you need to do is add a little to your personality, and then you will be accepted, although that's just my opinion. If you need any help, I have two ideas. You could PM me, or, look at your picture of Rainpaw and be very descriptive.[/glow]

[Browns:Ghost]

I thinks its fine. Accepted as Apprentice. PM Ivystar to get started on your training.